Environmental protection policies should not be applicable to corporations, which generate significant financial and economic growth, even if such growth may have a negative impact on the environment.
While I disagree with the proposal, it is necessary to weigh its pros and cons. We need to discuss some of the questions to understand the proposal like who is responsible for judging that economic growth is important or environment protect, what are the types of corporations that are generating significant financial growth and how much effect it is causing on the environment?
It must be a very educated and unbiased and experienced authority to decide the importance between environment protection and economic growth. If the corporation is ecofriendly that does not release any pollutants or harmful chemicals or non-biodegradable objects and uses renewable energy sources like the sun then harm it will cause to the environment will be very less. Whereas, if a company uses a large area of land and continuously releases toxins into the environment and uses a large amount of sources from the environment like trees and water then this company will cause great harm to the environment even after causing great financial success. So the type of corporation and resources it uses are an important factor to consider
Giving more importance to economic and financial growth than environmental protection has its own effects on everything in this world. Just increasing the economic growth and not caring of the environment will deplete many natural resources and will make lives of many animals vulnerable. We know how global warming due to pollution and the use of plastics have deteriorated the lives of many animals and marine life. If a country is highly developed but the environment is in very bad condition in that country then the development will not be of any use.
However, countries like India or underdeveloped countries who have sufficient supply of environment sources should focus more on its development and economic growth. It should not happen that foreign countries will use up all the resources of the underdeveloped country and its own condition is at very severe state. Here economic growth should be the first priority.
Hence, there are many factors that determine what should be given more importance but I disagree with the proposal as environment is very important for me in any case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, whereas, while, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20165745856 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99001854869 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475138121547 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4942848103 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.846153846 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196654588592 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859434741697 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766321523323 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118379697665 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494315624605 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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