Some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Others believe that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
People have different views about what is the most crucial factor when applying for a job. While, wage is vital to some extent, I would argue that a comfortable working environment is much more important.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people should take salary into consideration when getting a job. Firstly, it is obvious that everyone needs money to support their lives. For example, going to work helps people to have money to pay for housing, water bills or phone bills. A high paid job allows individuals to improve their living standard. In addition, because of being well paid, workers may get more motivation to accomplish the job, which might enhance the working productivity. If individuals have a job with low salary, they may have to spend time doing part-time jobs. This might prevent them from working effectively.
On the other hand, working environment is believed to be to the most vital factor. First of all, having good managers and friendly colleagues makes individuals feel comfortable at work, which may arouse their interest in their jobs. As a result, they will be motivated to work better. If people work in a competitive environment, they may feel stressed, which negatively affects their working results. Furthermore, because working with good co-workers, people can establish long lasting friendship. For example, my colleague becomes my closest friend who can share eveything with me and stand by my side whenever I need.
In conlusion, while there is no doubt about the importance of salary, I think that working environment is the key factor when choosing a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, no doubt, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0977443609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70919116585 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6457601311 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294203643067 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955585088312 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839984770756 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195698190707 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538413465882 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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