Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The meaning of one's life depends on a number of factors. While many claim for a luxury lifestyle to be joyful, it is a common notion that other factors such as health and human relationship mainly contribute to a better future.
On the one hand, with the presence of money in daily activities, everyone, regardless of age, have better access to more pleasure and satisfaction. In order words, personal hobbies or interests can solely by fulfilled when people are able to afford what they desire. The young generation, for instance, will be so into modern technological devices including touch-screen mobile phones, or portable and high resolution laptops so that they could be motivated to put more effort in work or study. Meanwhile, for older age, people work to their fullest potentials, targeting at gaining enough budget not only for bare necessities but also for investment in their children education and career in the long run.
On the other hand, material success alone might not be enough to create a happy life. A number of people believe health is one of the top priorities when dreaming for a sustainable development. A healthy body would allow everyone to participate in social activities or follow a passionate job which should be the source of joy for a human being. In addition, social relationships, especially family bonding, plays an indispensable part in one's happiness. In terms of positive mental health, a wealthy lifestyle is far from comparable to an act of true love among family members which shall cost nothing but a warm heart. As a matter of fact, people from underprivileged backgrounds are still able to enjoy their simple life without a big mansion or a luxurious car.
In conclusion, despite the significance of economic success in everyone's life, I strongly suggest leading a lifestyle with a well-being state and healthy relationship is the key to a prosperous future.
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- Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.Discuss both these views and give your own opinions. 73
- It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
The meaning of ones life depends on a number of factors. Wh...
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Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...e depends on a number of factors. While many claim for a luxury lifestyle to be joyful, it...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...bonding, plays an indispensable part in ones happiness. In terms of positive mental ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0664556962 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.950458523 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3123466646 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107338836246 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041268247363 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443592203384 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684331182349 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324872787604 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.