It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
In comparison to people in the previous time, many city dwellers nowadays lead a sedentary lifestyle and thus they find it challenging to perform any physical exercises on a regular basis. This might be the results of some root causes and some solutions should be proposed to alleviate this problem.
Regarding the causes of this issue, workplace commitment is one to take consideration into. Many adults have been struggling with their life for years finding a way to make a living by devoting all of their time to working. This means that they are less likely to have time for any physical activities including doing exercises. Furthermore, it is true that several high school or university students have a preference for a sedentary lifestyle, which is a result of the state-of-the-art technology, especially online games or social network. Such virtual activities are considered to be highly addictive when exposing in a long time and could lead to some serious damage to their eyes.
Looking at the solutions, governing bodies should really implement new regulations relating to adjusted working hours for certain kinds of people. By doing so, more time can be spent on leisure activities particularly playing sports, lifting weights, or even just doing some 45-minute fat-blasting total body workouts. Some information technology corporations, indeed, have recently introduced their applications to support people in doing these activities. This way, anyone who uses such applications could be better aware of the significance of developing a habit of regular workout.
To summarize, there certainly are a number of reasons leading to the way of life of many citizens such as work-related duties or the downside of modern technology. However, efforts can be taken by both the IT companies and people themselves in order to promote the healthy habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'performing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: performing
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, thus, well, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30743243243 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9790765816 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5275211514 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113444280537 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394596191041 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340501967734 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701231281803 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436429177353 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.