Financial success plays a significant role in deciding the emotion of human beings. While some believed in this assumption, personally, I would say backward that one’s happiness does not only relies on wealth but also on other aspects.
To begin with, economic goals have an undeniable importance role with humans. People with an enormous amount of money always get life easier. They are able to afford anything they wish for. Moreover, wealth also brings admiration as well as fame. In some cases, money is the only solution. For instance, cancer requires expensive expenses to cure and people who are unable to afford that will have to face death unpredictable. Money can deal with some psychological issues. Recent studies show that shopping will reduce stress and depression. These reasons have asserted one side of the assumption.
On the other hand, I believed that humans happiness not only depends on financial ability. The family connection needs to be established by loving and caring, not money. For example, parents who always busy at work do not spend enough time for their kids and this makes an invisible distance. Another factor is friendship, which depends on connection and belief in each other. Reality has shown that friendship which is built on an economic basis always fall apart rapidly. Spiritual factors are the most significant influence on personal pleasure, as can be seen.
In conclusion, financial success is very indispensable with humans, especially in recent society but I believed that other spiritual factors' contribution is the most indubitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73414383342 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1202999269 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1111111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0555555556 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20400944798 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05709049774 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678032087146 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131605410652 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469653982314 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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