more and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker do you think this is a positive or negative development
Over the past decades, the advantage of technology has never failed to draw of public attention and provoke debates. Although, it helps people do everything easier, it also has harmful. For me, household good is useful if it is used to bring more benefits than drawbacks
The first thing we can not deny that the quality of live has improved by electrical devices. In fact, thanks to the sophisticated design, everything has done easier. For instance, a vacuum cleaner can make people feeling doing house work is not to be a burden or microwave and rice cooker can make cooking becoming an enjoyable process. Thus, the time and energy saved due to house hold goods allow people to work and rest better. This example indicated that the more time you save, the more other things you can do
On the other hand, there are some arguments that it can be a threat to the health of people and wasting money. Some people who against buying a wide range of household goods hold their views for reasons. Firstly, people usually adopt sedentary lifestyle and inactive because the convenience bring for them. As a result, it makes the rate of obesity and other diseases higher. Secondly, when people think it is old and needed to update, they usually throw away and buy a new machine even though the old can continue using. This action will affect to the environment and spend a lot of money buying a new household goods.
In conclusion, household goods bring both upsides and downsides. If human use it carefully, its advantages will eclipse its disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'good'?
Suggestion: good
...d a lot of money buying a new household goods. In conclusion, household goods bring ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78731343284 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47690097244 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3058062752 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275376813261 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752516538469 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656563532699 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135248616487 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539987659583 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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