A growing body of individuals agree that people should do some activities to sharpen their mental skills including reading, and word puzzles as well, in their free time. Whereas, others give priority to calm down their minds by doing rest. Wheather rest to mind is essential or not has always been a question, and sparked heated debate all over the world. As per my opinion, the activity which helps him to rejuvenate, should be selected by a person in his free time.
At the outset, due to various considerations, it can be agreed that reading and solving word puzzles helps a person to sharp his mind. This is because of a simple reason, word puzzles and readings are likely to be an mental exercise. As physical exercises are needed to the proper growth, and maintaince of body, likewise mental exercise is required to the mind. Besides this, reading enhances the vocabulary and knowledge of a person, resulting he becomes more smarter and confident with adequate knowledge.
Nonetheless, I also believed that people should take some rest in their free time, because it increases the capabilities of mind, to memorize and recall. Leisure time gets after the hectic schedule of professional, and personal works, then definitely people should spend it while giving rest to their minds. By doing so, they eliminate their stress upto some extent, and would have more energy while returning to their obligations.
In conclusion, it is sensible to say that, although reading, and solving puzzles helps the person in various ways, but it would be propitious if they get some free time to give rest to their mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rd puzzles as well, in their free time. Whereas, others give priority to calm down thei...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d puzzles and readings are likely to be an mental exercise. As physical exercises ...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
...ledge of a person, resulting he becomes more smarter and confident with adequate knowledge. ...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their stress upto some extent, and would have more energy while returning to thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, nonetheless, so, then, well, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9852398524 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59329534711 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2036704257 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256772299587 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980392239017 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568725024243 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157570578075 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558774914771 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.