The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below illustrates the portion of households in personal and rented accommodation between 1918 and 2011 in England and Wale.
Overall, at the beginning of the survey (1918) to 1961, a significant portion of people in England and Wale lived in rented accommodation. Midway (1971), a balance in the percentage of households in rented and owned accommodation was accomplished. This trend changed as more people now live in personal apartment than rented apartment from 1981 to 2011.
In 1918, a significant portion of people ( about 79%) lived in rented apartment. This pattern continued until in 1971, when 50% of the people were able to own an apartment. From 1981 to 2001, the rate at which people rent accommodation declined to about 31% although a slight increase in accommodation renting (about 36%) was observed in 2011.
On the other hand, a reverse in pattern of owned accommodation bwas noticed in 1918 with an insignificant number of people in the UK having personal accommodation (about 23%). There exists a change in such pattern as more people began to own apartment from 1939 ( about 33%) to about 69% in 2011. There was a minimal decrease in apartment ownership in 2011 where about 65% lived in owned accommodation

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98048780488 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95949253653 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478048780488 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1902302078 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258200534547 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131503472897 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107322523983 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217538577096 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120398547259 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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