The bar below illustrates the percentage of Australian male and female citizens in various age category that performed constant physical activity in 2010.
Overall, females in Australia did constant physical activity in 2010 than males in all age classes with the exclusion of those within the ages of 15 to 24 who performed regular physical activity less than their male counterparts.
Women within the age groups 35 to 44 (52.5%), 45 to 54 (53.3%) and 55 to 64 (53%) carried out physical activity regularly more than every other women in other age groups ( 15 to 24, 25 to 34 and 65 and others who had 47.7%, 48.9% and 47.1% degree of activity respectively.
On the other hand, Men within the age group 15 to 24 engaged in physical activity constantly more than other males categories with 52% of them involved in regular physical activity. Age class 35 to 44 in the men group had the least physical activity with only 39.5% of them carrying out constant physical activity in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an every other women in other age groups 15 to 24, 25 to 34 and 65 and others who...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hand, Men within the age group 15 to 24 engaged in physical activity constantly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75882352941 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57134192747 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7461228339 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.8 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398699644294 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246379972611 0.103423049105 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434853109105 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264172324863 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394731793837 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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