there was a civil rights movement in your city. the state government blocked mobile internet connectivity to curb the rumor spreading. you felt that this move was unreasonable lodge a complaint to chief minister for same. in your letter
introduce yoirself
describe what difficulty you faced
what you want to do for you
I am writing this letter to register a compliant on the way that we are recently be treated by the local government. As they have halted the internet services for the whole area in order to liberate the rumor at the city. My name is Bilal Abg, I have been living here for more than 12 years. Thus, I certainly know the local people very well and I can assure that such method will never overcome this issue, but only will exacerbate the situation.
Since most of the inhabitants are using the internet for various purposes and the major population are foreign university students who are doing lots of research related to their specialities through the internet. moreover, they’re connecting to their families outside the town by internet. Stop this service for unfair justification will affect all of us and make our life more difficult.
Therefore, I would be extremely grateful if you could please help us to return such essential facilities to our city. However, we can collaborate with the local government to identify people who are distributing some wrong news about the city in order to be punished or even banish from the city.
Finally, I hope that you will address this concern as soon as possible. I look forward to receiving your great response.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tants are using the internet for various purposes and the major population are fo...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...heir specialities through the internet. moreover, they're connecting to their famil...
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng your great response. Best regards Bilal
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...great response. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91818181818 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64465779942 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668181818182 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8495637531 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1666666667 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139849035297 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469934169112 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276840548025 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809901958824 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159630310038 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.