there was a civil rights movement in your city. the state government blocked mobile internet connectivity to curb the rumor spreading. you felt that this move was unreasonable lodge a complaint to chief minister for same. in your letter
introduce yoirself
describe what difficulty you faced
what you want to do for you
Dear chief minister,
The objective of writing this letter is to lodge a complaint against the blocking mobile internet connectivity policy. Actually, last week, state government made a decision to block internet connectivity during the public protest against caste based reservation in order to tackle the problems caused by rumor spreading.
I am a loyal citizen of royal state Haryana and working in business field. I have to transfer money online on the time of commercial dealing. Therefore, blocking internet connectivity caused various concerns such as financial crisis, braking international dealing and so on to me. This decision of government was quite unacceptable as authority could only block the communication ways of internet like as face-book, whats-app, twitter and many more. They should not block all site of world web especially net banking.
Hope you understand my problems and would take some proactive steps to overcome the issues which often emerge by this policy.
Looking forward to receiving your response on it.
Yours sincerely,
Harman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear chief minister, The objective of writing this letter is ...
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Suggestion:
...rward to receiving your response on it. Yours sincerely, Harman
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... response on it. Yours sincerely, Harman
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... on it. Yours sincerely, Harman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55757575758 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86705744021 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.721212121212 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3841888788 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274864673735 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860097200341 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636401085178 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107610957965 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684749495033 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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