A close friend is coming to visit you he/she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.
- Write a letter to your friend . In your letter ask more details about your friend's plans.
- Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown.
- Tell your friend about food or drink he/she should try during his/her stay.
Write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with Dear ________
Hi Ahmad,
It's great to hear from you. I am so excited to see soon in Damascus. Anyway, the reason that I am writing for you is to get more information about your plan, for how long you're going to stay in Damascus, and the most importantly is in what season you are going to visit Syria, as most of the hotels' prices are not fixed and changing throughout the year.
Anyhow, as you already know, Damascus is the oldest capital city worldwide, thus, most of its sightseeing has historical taste. For example, Al-Hamidia Souq is an open market which has plenty of handmade craft shops. Another spectacular place is called Omia Meuseum which's Contain many heritage paints and old tools which belong to Assyrian people. Finally, as far as I know, you are spending too much time in libraries, therefore, I recommend you to visit Al-Assad National library, as it has a unique and attractive books which's not found anywhere.
Guess what?! You will really enjoy Syrian cuisines, you really must try them. I would love to suggest several restaurant that make original Syrian meals. First of all, you should try Tabouleh in AST restaurant which's near the Blue Tower in the downtown. Afterward, I also recommend trying Sous drink in ERE snack which's beside the Roam Castle in Bab Touma.
Let me know if you need anything else,
Take care
Bilal
- Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done tackle these problems? 73
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill should be made a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 89
- In many countries, Student absent is a worrying problem for both parents and educators. What are the causes of this issue, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community? 78
- These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...formation about your plan, for how long youre going to stay in Damascus, and the most...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun restaurant seems to be countable; consider using: 'several restaurants'.
Suggestion: several restaurants
... must try them. I would love to suggest several restaurant that make original Syrian meals. First ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 328, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g Sous drink in ERE snack whichs beside the Roam Castle in Bab Touma. Let me know if...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Let me know if you need anything else, Take care Bilal
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, first, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7982832618 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4171817084 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690987124464 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6725674767 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178742985961 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515256624675 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615464155005 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100722176682 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700030079316 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.