Your family is moving to a new city. Write a letter to the real estate agency in your new city to enquire about a rental house.
In your letter, you should tell:
– explain when you are moving and the reason
– describe where you would like to live
– mention the type of house you need.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the advertisement for a rental property in today's newspaper. Since I will be moving to Singapore next month on account of employment, I am searching for suitable accommodation for a family of 4, including a baby.
Let explain my criteria. Firstly, I would like to live in the central area because, it is convenient to commute to office. Secondly, a play-school or a day-care center should be within the vicinity so that I can keep my baby there while I am at work. Thirdly, a hospital or 24/7 pharmacy close by will be advantageous in case of emergencies. Lastly, the area should neither be too noisy nor too isolated, and the neighborhood should be children friendly.
Furthermore, a 2 bedroom house, preferably with a balcony, is what we need. Although, it doesn't matter if it is an apartment or a villa, the rooms should be very spacious.
Please get in touch with me if you need further information.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... balcony, is what we need. Although, it doesnt matter if it is an apartment or a villa...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03185271436 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4459389935 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2727272727 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132073630278 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460052314738 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317874438758 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597913652168 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174554835324 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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