Many people believe that reducing the speed limit is the best option for road safety improvement. Do you think there are other measures that could be in place? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Undoubtedly it is not laborious to clarify that the reduction of speed limits could have significant impact on road’s safety.however there are other numerous factors which ought to be discussed for instance the cars standards or the perfection of roads.
nowadays, this particular topic has been highly controversial matter in hand .and most people are strongly appose to each other and most of them condemned this idea which by reducing the limitation of speed we only affect one side of the issue .that could be the downside of this idea and the concentration of driver is other important factor that must be concluded. Nonetheless the statistics has shown that the upcoming of this reduction has a dramatic effect on road accidents.
On the other hand , the car industry plays an impressive role on safety. Although Not long ago the production of these companies were bitterly disappointing , but nowadays their products were being lunched by international safty measurement. If these measures had not been developed, most of the utterly ridiculous accidents would end in tragedy.
mean while, the structure of roadway have had a vital influence on car crashes from the beginning . The impeccable timing of rouds curves , the pathway get deteriorated over time or the various materials ,which could use for snowy country or these cities which face torrential rain.the path should constantly be dried so the slope of paths should be mathematically checked especially on steep slopes.
in conclusion, due to the pros and cons of speed bumps and speed limits I believe that it is hard to condemn the effectiveness of this act . On the contrary there are other factors involved which should measured .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18115942029 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91586841563 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3526817123 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239684368165 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817332530247 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629537777297 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130319696848 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653964190168 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.