Tourism has increasly so much over the last 50 year that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, other claim that it is good for the economy. Dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give you own opinion
It is undeniable fact that tourism are being increased relentless which has become a major crisis for the local people and the natural world. Whereas, clamours are heard that it may prove beneficial for the economy development. This easy intends to discuss both pros and cons. I however, gravitate towards former view.
To embark with, the evidences are plenty to prove why tourism play a key in country's economic. The mammoth recognisable fact is that since strength of economic is worthwhile, it assists the government to sustain the presume into the formidable situations. Owing to the huge number of tourists, it inclines the nation's the income as tourist spend money on variety of areas, which in turn increase business such as hotels and other heritage places. In addition, due to the tourism industry, it helps to create a ton of jobs opportunities to the native masses, especially in the tourist services ranging from guide or taxi drivers. To illustrate, sanik public school which is locate in kapurthala city, attracting lots of overseas visitors.
In the contract, the great strength of tourists which lead to negative consequences. Burgeoning pollution in the historical sites is a big menace. Tourist carelessly leave garbage which pollute such precious sites. Even Traffic congestion or air pollution are growing because of tourism industry. More transport modes use mean create more pollution. Moreover, there are profound impacts on indigenous people. Local culture will be affected by overseas visitors. Since local inhabitants get influence from Western culture, they are adopting these culture instead of retaining preserved their ritual culture. Thus, local culture proceeds towards the disappear continuously.
To sum up, tourism industry has a few drawbacks as compared to its benefits. Albeit tourism can be worst in some situations, it has a major role in order to enhance nation's economic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37086092715 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77935114231 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649006622517 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3287716951 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135808095389 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348766695987 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285531471006 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805884951513 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169218060966 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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