Prison is the best way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree.
It is an undeniable fact is that in order to mitigate the problem of crime, prison is the best way in many countries, whereas providing a better education can confined problem of crime. I concur with this statement. I will discuss this in the following paragraphs.
To embark with, the evidences are plenty to prove why education plays a key role to solve these issues. The mammoth recognisable fact is that since education is such a best platform, it assists the people to live away from crime. Education conferres a ton of opportunities to grow in the future as well as to become a good citizen. For example, as per a recent survey in Netherland, there is best education system which helps to reduce crime rate. To ensure education is an effective way.
However, in order to prevent such crime obstacles, even prison an appropriate way. Education will prevent the crime in the beginning. Some worst situations that happen in the life and encourage people to commit crime . Thus, owing to the prison, society can be protect from dangerous offenders. Crime is burgeoning due to awareness of money power. For instance, in India where majority of critical cases have been ignored by money power. So, education is a such approach that more likely to prove worthwhile to prevent crime problems as well as society could be preserved with the help of it.
To contemplate, albeit prison is a way that solve crime problems, education significant contribution to solve problems and also may bring better results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88612099644 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7174867499 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5763821588 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24232829921 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754951840713 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079382518316 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171294154741 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513846285731 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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