You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
• What is the article about?
• What is the error?
• What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Mr. Carpenter,
I am writing this letter to warn you about an error on New York Times, where you are the editor, on its 26th June issue.
I saw an article that was called “Atlanta Mayor is in trouble again” in the newspaper yesterday, which commented on the recent election results in Atlanta that would create a setback for the Mayor, to whom I am the senior advisor of, in the metropolitan parliament in Atlanta. In the article it was written that Mayor will be forced to form a minority government because of the lack of majority in the city parliament. Apart from that, it was conveyed that Mayor would not govern the country as he wish because of the possible conflicts with the opposition.
The paper did not correctly express the election results because Mayor had the majority in the parliament. Therefore, there will not be any obstacles for the Mayor to govern or amend laws for the prosperity of the city.
I ask you to correct your mistake in your next issue that the majority in the parliament was won by the party of the Mayor. Atlanta Mayor is highly motivated for the office and with the majority of parliamenterians, he will succeed in the office.
I look forward to hearing from you and hope you will issue a correction tomorrow morning.
Yours Sincerely,
Ali Larter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wishes'.
Suggestion: wishes
...ayor would not govern the country as he wish because of the possible conflicts with ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77292576419 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69242216703 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558951965066 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1342784369 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157964682319 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622599593763 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935242769797 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117525210606 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118760275183 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.