With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
With the influx of abundant sorts of social media, nowadays, it is effected on youngsters as their mental state is not appropriate to choose whether what to bring about intensifying the work brain in terms of usefulness or not. The youngsters were impacted insomuch that they even suicide themselves.
Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure which is taken is to censure for using social media partly by way of censorship for the newspapers an TVs. Therewith the government attains a chance to control all the pages on social media and to block them that consist of harmful content. However, as a result of this prohibition there will be a lot of threats on social media inasmuch as the government cannot differ from one person to another characteristically. The government carries the obligatory not to intervene its people's inner world.
One more feasible approach to keep away youngsters the harms of social media can be parental control that is a kind of control using specific methods done by parents. It is remarkably effective because only parents are able to know deeply their son's or girl's character and inner world. They have the right to grow up their offspring the way they desired thus they can supervise their chatting and meeting without any permission unless the children catch to 18 years old.
Overall, this problem demands a couple of solutions to be solved, not one. With them, dissolving is not guarantee, but in current situation the best option, firstly, to get it under control and then to excel at dangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an (TVs)' or simply 'TVs'?
Suggestion: an (TVs); TVs
...by way of censorship for the newspapers an TVs. Therewith the government attains a cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, thus, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00766283525 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72747961509 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9678800585 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191049053669 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613897423296 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465917077981 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102699502587 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212006288856 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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