Some people feel that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others feel that the circumstances of an offence should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Every crime should be punishable! No one is beyond the law. A few individuals believe that any sort of misconduct should deal with the same penalties. Other opposed. According to them, before giving sentences, actual causes should be examined. I will discuss both the viewpoints and raise my opinion in conclusion.
To begin with, predefined penalties are essential to deal with any kind of offence. The same punishments for every type of offences are inevitable in the current era because offenders are committing crimes, and they are smart enough to manipulate with laws and get the benefits from the flaws of law. For example, France, where every criminal well acquainted about the already defined penalties which he/she will receive whatever the crime they commit. Hence, it helps to reduce the ratio of crime in the country just because of this afraid to let them assign long sentences if they do a tiny crime.
On the other hand, to sanction an identical punishment to all the inhabitants for different kind of crimes is irrelevant. Certainly, it leads to unjust with innocents who commit the crimes due to some reasons such as self-defence, unsound mind and minors. Therefore, all the realities should consider while making verdicts. For instance, the USA, where all the courts thoroughly investigate all the aspects of violence which could be happened to do misbehave. So, it is an effective way to send to the monotonous to the Jails who are harmful to others.
To conclude, all the crimes and criminals are not similar and should not treat at the same level in respect of sentencing. Predesigned harsh penalties can overcome the lawbreaking. Unfortunately, it does not work all the time and occasionally affects common people. In best of my opinion, penalties should link with the type of crime, and the root cause of committing such an act, not predefined sentences are better to cope-up with the crime.
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- Some people feel that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others feel that the circumstances of an offence should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are better to cope-up with the crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05015673981 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74974348237 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7278809218 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7647058824 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224842065572 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697638963567 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540975368879 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1455581344 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683832315537 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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