Some people believe that for a hobby to be enjoyable it should be hard to learn or acquire. Do you agree or disagree?
Tough pastimes are to any person what pillars are to buildings. With regard to the pace of alterations in pursuits, what is thought by some is that the more a hobby is hard to be acquired, the more it becomes enjoyable. The truth is not so much that hobbies are not necessary to humans, but that pursue those pastimes which are of difficulty can shape the principle of the way they reside, not least through humanity and health developments.
The merit of pastimes learned difficulty occupy center stage in creating a successful life that some would lead. Seemingly dull as hard hobbies might be, they rise endurance in unexpected ways, helping them cope with feasible issues they will face. having an independent life is a case in point. In effect, with the help of experience they gain during taking a tough hobby, they would manage their lives independently in a foreseeable future, succeeding potentially in having a job. It is for this reason tough pursuits known as enjoyable ones have been garnered.
Looked at from the healthy point of view, the issue of such these hobbies seems to be bound up with probable risks they may deliver. At first blush, some activities such as scuba-diving and paragliding might come across as a problem in that they may put a doer’s life in jeopardy, even posing them to the decease. In most cases, these hobbies, however, can remain and improve people’s health, notably some of whom are being faced with profound depression, helping them think creatively, coming up with innovative ideas. In other words, as the old saying goes, a sound mind dwells in a sound body. Evidently, those pastimes taken hard are perceived as worthwhile and delightful ones which play a part in keeping residents in a healthy manner.
In the final analysis, much as difficult hobbies might put someone’s health at risk as well as appear boring, what these hobbies can do acts as a catalyst for the improvement of healthy mentality and strength needed for tackling problems. Indeed, for all the apparent difficulties of these pastimes people may encounter, it would be in all our interests to pursue these activities. As a result, if tough pursuits are like pillars, under no circumstances should we lose the importance of such hobbies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...e the principle of the way they reside, not least through humanity and health development...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...pe with feasible issues they will face. having an independent life is a case in point....
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Line 3, column 731, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy manner" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... which play a part in keeping residents in a healthy manner. In the final analysis, much as diffic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, in most cases, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94764397906 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75146207872 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0524308126 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207503300188 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598933734492 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506872553424 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124644700019 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225723287111 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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