The diagrams show the procedures of how to produce bricks for building purpose. Overall, there are five stages of the process, using a number of equipments before being able to be used.
In the first step, clay is digged from ground with a digger. This clay will be put on a metal grid, which makes the clay into smaller pieces on the roller. The resulting material will be combined with sand and water and then be rolled into a wire cutter or a mould to take shape of bricks, which are still soft.
After that, these shaped bricks will be dried in a drying oven for about 24-48 hours. Then it comes to the final stage in which bricks will turn hard, which has three containers. The bricks pass through first kiln of moderate temperature of 200 to 980 degrees, to the second kiln of high temperature at 870 to 1,300 degrees and finally they will be cooled down in the cooling chamber. The whole process of heating and cooling takes 48-72 hours.
After all the stages above, bricks are packaged and ready to be delivered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, still, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50537634409 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14822456251 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6652035378 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101264282286 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477086525901 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502822239677 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072143958273 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587887900136 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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