The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This diagram demonstrates the process of making bricks that used for the building industry. Overall, it can clearly be seen that, the process of manufacturing industrial bricks consists of 7 steps. Starting by digging the ground and ends by delivery.
To begin, the first step is producing the clay which used to make the bricks by digging the ground using a large digger. Then the clay placed into a metal grid to break up the clay into small pieces, a roller is used to help in this step. After that, the clay is mixed with sand and water, then this mixture is turned into bricks by either putt...
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making bricks that used for the building industry.
making bricks used for the building industry.
making bricks that are used for the building industry.
...the clay which used to make the bricks
...the clay which is used to make the bricks
...the clay used to make the bricks
Then the clay placed into a metal grid
Then the clay is placed into a metal grid
the bricks transferred to the drying oven
the bricks are transferred to the drying oven
the bricks exposed to moderate temperature
the bricks are exposed to a moderate temperature
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