Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent years,transportation has become a crucial concern of the governments.Although a certain group of people argue that decision makers should allocate more budgets to roads,I think devoting governments more money to railways would be more beneficial.
Firstly,dedicating a large sum of money to constructing railway systems can reduce atmospheric pollution.Trains have higher capacity to transfer goods and passengers than roads, this prevent the use of vehicles on roads.As a consequence,carbon dioxide and other toxic gases emitted by combustion engines,which is the major cause of air pollution are more likely to minimize.
Furthermore,a railway system could provide a context in which travelers can reach their destinations at ease.They would be less prone to roads accidents,traffic congestion or road rage.Not only could they could derive more comfort from their journeys,but they would not spend time getting stuck in traffic.
However,many might believe that road freight would offer great volume of goods to be transported.They should bear in mind that this amount of goods is highly unlikely to be delivered to their owners on time,especially during flooding and winter months,and this problem is bound to become important when it comes to drugs.For instance,hospital patients waiting for their medicines sent will end up with death if their drugs are delivered to them late.As a result,getting a small volume of goods sent by railways could help people and patients receive their orders on time without worrying about handling them any time.
To conclude,I think governments need to spend more money on railways followed more merits which are reducing air pollution and providing passengers with a pleasant journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63878326996 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46747631311 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.126437131 49.4020404114 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.6 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160350300676 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966813238459 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436025199329 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966813238459 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436025199329 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.24 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.32 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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