Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I completely disagree, I feel that segregating schools is almost a crime against modern society. Kids are not born being prejudiced they are taught to be. Whether it's gender bias, racism, financial etc, these are all taught through experience. I guess that if kids started going to schools separated by gender, eventually the kids will ask: why don't any girls go here? It is difficult to believe there would be a positive answer for that question. When these kids become adults and leave the school, it is likely they will feel different from the others. It is exactly at this point that the prejudice starts.
Usually, childhood is the time to learn a lot things about human behavior and one of those is gender differences between boys and girls. If a kid has studied in a school with just girls or boys, this kid has a high probability to be prejudice in the future, for sure. But we can not blame him/her for this attitude because he/she was taught how to be like that. So, acting with a gender bias would be pretty normal to them.
Thinking about gender bias, I guess that prejudice against girls is more intense than with boys. Maybe with boys this prejudice almost does not exist. All of it was created by a society and a society is built by people, so people are prejudiced against one another. Personally, I get upset when I see a woman stereotyping themselves with this negative thought, like: Okay, we can not do this because we are women and this is for men. I can say that in general, we do not want to be treated with privileges, as many think. We just want to be equal
For example, a couple days ago I was watching a YouTube video about a Brazilian bodybuilder that went to Kuwait for training in one of the best gyms around the world. It is like a temple specializing in building muscles and athletes with the strong mindset of a champion. But an interesting point, beyond that was a very different culture that shocks me a lot. Mainly the gender differences which are pretty normal in that country. For instance, the girls usually goes to a specific school, just for them. Usually the women need to walk one step behind their husbands, there was a different gym and a bunch of places that are only for men. It is really a culture shock but, there are some situations that can be worse, because depending on the family a girl may not be able to go to school, normally just the boys are able to
For those reasons, I feel that specific schools separated by gender will create prejudice in all fields of life. And it is a shame that naïve kids could be taught to look at the gender bias as a normal thing.
- If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice using specific reasons and details. 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People learn things better from those at their own level - such as fellow students or co-workers - than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors. Use specific reasons and examples 70
- People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
- Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you supp 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nder, eventually the kids will ask: why dont any girls go here? It is difficult to b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i guess, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48541666667 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41734096196 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6572875351 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7083333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865205131212 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277174177414 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303998033178 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540638596274 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186506625732 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.