Some people prefer to live in hot climates. Whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Climates have a huge impact on peoples’ lifestyles. While some people love to live their life in warm weather, others prefer to stay at chilling cold. This essay will argue why living at a country where the condition is hot and humid will be far more advantageous than living at a cold country.
To begin with, on the one side of the coin, people living at warm climate will be able to lead a healthy lifestyle. In warmer countries, people can easily go outside which gives them the ability to do activities such as jogging, swimming, and playing sports. Because of being active throughout the year, people’s lifespan will increase. For instance, people in Asian countries such as Japan and China live longer than the people in western countries. A person will definitely prefer the climate where they will be able to lead a longer, healthier, and happier life.
On the other side, people in colder countries can enjoy the beauty of the cold weather. Since it snows a lot in colder countries, people tend to enjoy the view of it. They can also wear fashionable winter clothes. For example, western people often wear beautiful winter coats and boots. Since winter stays around for a while, people who lives under those cold conditions can enjoy seeing snow and wearing beautiful clothes more.
To conclude, If a person wants to live a comfortable life, he will definitely consider living in a country where the climate will suite him. Although humans who live in hot and humid weather can lead a healthy life, those who live in winter countries can also have a comfortable life. To recapitulate this in my opinion, people in warmer countries will lead a better lifestyle because the weather is more preferable for most.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87837837838 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53326120737 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3976754567 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252873833279 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913021120026 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622927001247 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163320492085 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443518829306 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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