Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Visiting zoos became a major entertainment activity in most of the countries around the world. However, some activists ask to give these animals the freedom by returning them to where they should belong. This essay presents the activists opinion and gives reasons on why should the zoos remain.

To start with, the animal rights seekers justify their opinion with two reasons. Firstly, they say that no need to keep the animals in cages just for the human to watch and suggest using recorded videos when needed or to visit the jungles to watch them. Secondly, nature is the home for these animal wh...

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