In recent years, there is a significant growth in self-employment all over the world. This essay will analyze some main reasons, as well as examine some several drawbacks of this growing trend.
The option to become a self-employed is quite attractive for some reasons. Firstly, people who work for themselves have more flexible schedule because they do not worried about time attendance systems most office workers experience. Secondly, they get to work with people they like and make their own decision about who to hire and terminate, they can build a team aligned to their personality and goals. In term of their dreams, self-employed people, instead of working for a company or organization, would be able to launch their own business. They will have the freedom to innovate, express their own views, have influence beyond their own role and compete with other companies and people.
Despite those, there are also some negative aspects that should be taken into consideration. One of the biggest disadvantages of self-employment is the unsteadiness of income, especially in early days. They could go several months without earning a profit, and they will always have to pay running costs such as rent, utility bills, groceries. Also, unlike employees, freelancers’ payment vary significantly, depending mostly on their clients’ targets. Another problem is social isolation, when working alone for a long period of time, they will miss out on the workplace environment, feeling lonely and have no one to compete with, as a consequence, they are lack motivation. Furthermore, due to the flexible schedule, they need to work for longer hours and unpredictable, especially business owner. It’s vital for them to handle all aspects of their business, ranging from marketing and sale to financial and administrative responsibilities, as a result, the amount of family time is reduced.
In conclusion, although being a self-employed has some certain attractions, there are some disadvantages that should be considered carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43081761006 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16676659451 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7717934667 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203290880869 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775622400208 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891388528875 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153003968746 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102937222915 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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