The two maps illustrate various changes of Grange park from its opening in 1920 to present.
Overall, it is evident that the park has been re–arranged significantly and more entertainment facilities such as play area and café have been added over the given period.
In 1920, visitors can enter the park from the northern entrance on Arnold avenue or the southern one on Eldon street, but now the park has a new entrance from the underground car park. A fountain was located right at the heart of the park, with a large stage for musicians on the left. At the present, the former was replaced by a large rose garden surrounded by many seats while the latter was destructed to make room for an amphitheater for concerts.
Previously, there were two rose gardens on the north and south of the stage and one on the right of the northern entry, with many seats placed next to them, but now, only the one on the north existed. The northeastern corner used to be space for a pond for water plants while the southeastern one was for a glasshouse. The today picture shows that they are substituted by a cafe, a children’s play area and a water feature respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67149758454 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73206238179 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8546972707 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130725148117 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593905583552 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471097993717 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809261480669 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489279366066 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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