In recent years, due to stiff competition in each and every year, many people are in an opinion that competitive sports positively impact the children. However, some disagree with the above notion. Before presenting my view, I like to explore both sides of the argument.
Competitive sports offer many advantages to the children. It helps the children to survive in a society that thrives on competition. Moreover, the competitive sports provides challenges to the children and makes them to solve it. They also teach discipline and systematic lifestyle to the children.
Competitive sports also has some disadvantages like it deters the mental health of the children. If the competitive sports are played at cost at all attitude, some unethical means are adopted by the children to win the competition. It also destroys the relationship among the children. The child may treat the fellow team player as his rivalry and may laugh at his failure and may get depressed when he himself losses the game.
In my opinion, competitive sports have many pros and cons. I feel that the educational institutions should maintain strict regulations to check if the children are following any unethical means during playing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24489795918 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87208193544 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6756635151 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23885394569 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880261251009 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515654345503 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144650605601 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354878332104 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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