Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As an interview process, apart from academic and technical questions pertaining to a job, a candidate is often questioned on what are the kind of activities he does in his free time and his marital status. Whether this is just an ice breaker to pep up the nervous candidate or is recorded for further analysis on his profile? This essay further deliberates on this conundrum.
People spend enormous amount of time in the office and hence, companies need to provide employees with comfortable family-like set up. People from similar backgrounds thrive in a harmonious manner and help to create bond between team members. For example, employees who playing soccer bond well and form clubs where they can form social groups. This helps employees to work in team and ensure smooth running of the business without much conflicts in office. Man is a social animal and longs to be in company of others to resolve their issues. In case a staff member is having marital disputes, a fellow colleague can offer counselling help to alleviate his marriage related problems.
However, every coin has a flip side, recruiters often collect this information to decide whether an employee should be hired or fired from a job depending upon his personal status. This approach adopted would lead to losing a valuable talent. Ofcourse, a lot of money and time is spent on recruiting a person – but by prying in his personal space and making decisions based on this information is equivalent to being unjust with the staff. Many companies, before recruiting check with the female job seekers on their marital status to gauge their devotion and tenure with the organisation. Right candidates would avoid to work with such entities and companies eventually may get bad reputation.
Based on the aforementioned discussion, the intent of gathering personal information should be evaluated. If this information helps an employee and the company, it would be worthwhile to ask employees about their personal details.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a harmonious manner" with adverb for "harmonious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... People from similar backgrounds thrive in a harmonious manner and help to create bond between team me...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... smooth running of the business without much conflicts in office. Man is a social an...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'colleague'.
Suggestion: colleague
...ff member is having marital disputes, a fellow colleague can offer counselling help to alleviate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12844036697 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76275619245 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6372782902 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201431854356 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639206613479 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367070506316 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120180421824 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316190782958 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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