In the argument above the characteristics of a society depends on the way of talking ,dressing ,living and the atmosphere they must have created in urban areas the economical status of city is responsible for the betterment of society the people living in cities.
On the other hand the cultural prospect of any society comes from the rural areas the people living there maintain their lifestyle in a very culture oriented way and the population is very limited in rural areas.For example a villager earns very less as compared to a middle class men but they live their life very happily because their needs for living is different as compared to any wealthy men the availability of technology and the products which the rich men use for their pleasure is very scarce in rural areas
To study the characteristics of society one should know the values of cultures and festivals of the people living in rural areas but the economical values is also important for the prospect of society.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a society depends on the way of talking ,dressing ,living and the atmosphere they...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... depends on the way of talking ,dressing ,living and the atmosphere they must have...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ey must have created in urban areas the economical status of city is responsible for the b...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...pulation is very limited in rural areas.For example a villager earns very less as c...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
....For example a villager earns very less as compared to a middle class men but they...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...very less as compared to a middle class men but they live their life very happily b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 2235.4752809 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 442.535393258 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86982248521 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68093703946 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 215.323595506 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508875739645 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 704.065955056 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 23.0359550562 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.5 60.3974514979 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 411.5 118.986275619 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.5 23.4991977007 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 5.21951772744 469% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908952290036 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763755750343 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00343952332954 0.0758088955206 5% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778441143737 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031961175535 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.8 14.1392134831 310% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.78 48.8420337079 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.0 12.1743820225 296% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.15 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 100.480337079 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 11.2143820225 317% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 11.7820224719 306% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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