You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
ask your friend to send you one of the photographs
explain why you need that particular photograph
and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it
Dear Sam,
Hello! I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. It'll remain a memorable time forever we had on a trip to Amritsar. I think this was the best holiday destination we have ever visit. The pictures we took on this trip will always remind us of the enjoy we had. I'd be very thankful if you send me the photos of mine which I marked as a favorite on your phone.
It was a depressing moment for me when I checked my phone, I saw that the quality of most photos isn't good. However, I managed to collect some good pics from my phone but I'm not satisfied. I'd like to request you to send me some photos of mine because I'm planning to frame those photos.
I know you already sent me all the photographs when we are traveling back home but unfortunately that photos have been deleted by my younger sister. Almost 45 photos are deleted and I'm only left with few pictures which aren't my favorite.
Hoping to meet you again.
Best wishes
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...k on this trip will always remind us of the enjoy we had. Id be very thankful if you send...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...l always remind us of the enjoy we had. Id be very thankful if you send me the pho...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...lways remind us of the enjoy we had. Id be very thankful if you send me the photos...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
..., I saw that the quality of most photos isnt good. However, I managed to collect som...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ollect some good pics from my phone but Im not satisfied. Id like to request you t...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ics from my phone but Im not satisfied. Id like to request you to send me some pho...
^^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... to send me some photos of mine because Im planning to frame those photos. I kn...
^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ister. Almost 45 photos are deleted and Im only left with few pictures which arent...
^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...nd Im only left with few pictures which arent my favorite. Hoping to meet you aga...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u again. Best wishes Harsimran Singh
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35869565217 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29520334875 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8049611783 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168689746139 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650237127706 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725479124566 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106928298284 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053179790733 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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