Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For ages, rich countries took advantages of poorer countries, using their natural resources without giving anything. This have brought the poorer nations, such as the African countries, in horrible condition.
Nowadays, something is changing, and richest countries help poorer ones with money. Unfortunately, this could not solve the problem of poverty, but I think that it is a beginning.
Nations wants to help the poorest villages all around the world, and giving money of course is helpful. On the other hand, not everything could be bought by money, so I strongly believe that it is important that country that used every natural prosperity of other nations help in lots of different ways. For example, they could help little village teaching to them how to use for the best their resources.
On the other hand, poor nations maybe want to grow alone, without the interference of someone who ruined their economy and brought them to poverty. They maybe see help as control, so the best way to help is only financial, without any other suggestion on how they have to administrate the money. I can understand this point of view, but unfortunately there are many cases where corruption have controlled the money that maybe are for schools or hospitals. Despite it, I think that it is fundamental for countries to control by theirselves their economy.
To conclude, how to help poor countries is a very complicate question and there is not one solution, but I believe that everyone have to do their part to improve the situation of the poorest people on the Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, i think, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99619771863 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68207763849 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.373216645 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243502619273 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938655176257 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567611998007 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147957510606 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327335571782 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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