The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.
The graph illustrates the difference between male and female employees in six sectors in two different years.
In 1975, numbers of men employed were always higher than the numbers of women, in every sectors considerated in the study. This trend do not change in 1995, with the only exception of wholesale and retail trade and communications sectors. For example in the first one, men employed were about 700000, instead female workers were just under 800000. The sector with the highest number of employees was public sector in 1975. In 1995, it have changed for female workers, but not for men.
Comparing employment sectors in the different two years, the number of employees changed for women, while it remained almost stable for men. For instance, considering finance/banking sector, the number of women in 1975 were less than half than the numer in 1995.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... was public sector in 1975. In 1995, it have changed for female workers, but not for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0985915493 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58618550863 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4425346476 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276042392092 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13113932089 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413120360058 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18676941401 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445312752554 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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