Some people feel that animals should have the same rights as humans, but others think they are not as equal or intelligent as us so should not have the same rights. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
It is argued by some individuals that fauna should be given same privilege as humans. However, others disagree and believe that humans are more intelligent as compared with animals and should not have equal rights. Before reaching to a conclusion, this essay will discuss both the aspects in following paragraphs.
To begin with, animals are also the part of this world as humans are; therefore, they also deserve equal rights as human being do. There are many similarities between humans and animals such as emotions, sense of pain, happiness, life cycle of birth and death, reproduction. Thus, animals must be given complete rights as humans have. In addition to that, they are part of ecosystem in which humans are affected with animals and vice-versa, thus their presence and absence has necessary role to play in our ecology. Therefore, animals deserve all the privileges to live peacefully.
However, animal brain is not developed similar to humans; therefore, cannot perform all the activities as humans do to save ecosystem, thus many individuals believe that animals should not be provided with equal privileges. Mostly animals are trained creatures, their own capacity to do something is limited because their intellectual capacity is low. Therefore, many individuals consider that humans are superior than other creatures, hence, fauna does not deserve similar rights as humans do. For instance, humans do make these rules and regulations to make the society better and peaceful and animal contribution is zero in such aspects. Hence, animals cannot acquire the same right to humans.
To conclude, although fauna are not that much smart as compared with humans, I believe that they are also living creatures of the same world, therefore the world should not discriminate for them and provide equal opportunity to have privilege.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
...umans are; therefore, they also deserve equal rights as human being do. There are man...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...duals consider that humans are superior than other creatures, hence, fauna does not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31740614334 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65521552489 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0378812033 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24494814634 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100352052388 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793080494873 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183326765824 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860448166035 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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