The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.
Prevention is better than cure. To minimize the health-related problems prevention is the best step. Therefore government should maximize its funds on inhibiting steps. Various prominent reasons are behind which will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail.
One of the major factors is some disease are not curable such as cancer. Majority of the nations are working hard and spending a lot of money to prepare medicine against cancer like a problem in the world. Although pure success is still not achieved any scientist. Thus, spread on awareness among individuals and promoting natural products should be the prime motto of authorities. Moreover, the health camps in society after regular intervals can prevent various infections and maintain a healthy culture in the community.
Another predominant factor is the side effects of these medicines. Almost all the drugs are chemical compounds which not in present but maybe in future can impact the body of the consumer. In addition to that, sometimes miscalculation with the medicine has proven fatal results, hence prevention of diseases needs a dire notice. The government must educate people over the prevention steps of any infection spread. For illustration, the spread of malaria infection is very common in the rainy season because of the presence of stagnant water in the drainage systems. Therefore good control of sanitation and hygiene is vital during such times.
In conclusion, health issues must be controlled on preliminary stages to minimize the spread and contamination. Ill effects of some medicine have proven that these compounds are no safer for the human body. Hence, authorities should increase funding on prevention steps as compared to treatments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...stagnant water in the drainage systems. Therefore good control of sanitation and hygiene ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40441176471 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84511319944 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3092693958 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17173990554 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051871861066 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583620441771 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114208125702 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649842726118 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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