“Students should fund their education with part-time work that they do while they study.”
Students and part-time job share a controversial relation. There has been a debate among many educationists. If I were to choose between a part-time job and studies, there would be many areas I would like to research before coming to a conclusion. Practically speaking, there are equally weighted pros and cons on this issue.
Firstly, speaking of pros—students can gain practical knowledge, they may have some sort of stable income to meet their expenses for food, clothes and so on, it may increase self - confidence, it helps them to adjust in the corporate working style before in hand which helps them in performing their duties after graduation, it may increase their contacts in their fields to get growth in their career faster, they may acquire time management skills, they may also know to invest in right place. Speaking of foreign students, they can do part-time jobs in their universities itself which may help them in managing their coursework and job both.
Secondly, if we look at the cons in doing part-time jobs—there will be no job security, there will be no other allowances as in case of full-time jobs including health insurance, vacation time and paid holidays. Moreover there may be health related issues due to lack of sleep, there may be exhaustion, and there may be the thoughts of leaving college in case earning money is very important.
Thus, balancing both studies and job is important if one choose to do part-time job while studying. Though there are benefits doing a part-time job, the final decision should be of the student himself or herself. There should not be any compulsion on them to do part-time jobs and in this respect I disagree with the statement given. But, I do support people who are willing to do part-time jobs only when they are really interested in doing it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...rance, vacation time and paid holidays. Moreover there may be health related issues due ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they are really interested in doing it.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, sort of, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92532467532 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73229635776 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.975752782 60.3974514979 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 5.21951772744 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252989949801 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103817134655 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731781996814 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148561776189 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853097269762 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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