It is indeed true that most of the people find exotic fils more interesting and prefer to watch those movies compared to local films. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for that and discuss why local industry films need financial support.
The first and foremost reason is that foreign movie industry uses highly advanced technology in their films which is the primary asset for these movies. They also had highly reputed actors and actresses who are known across the world. For instance, Hollywood uses different locations all over the world to shoot a single film and uses various cinematic affects which makes the audience feel very much excited to watch the film. Moreover, foreign films are based on different themes like action, science and technology, psychological thrillers and comedy. Secondly, english films help us to improve our english, which we would use in our daily communication.
I believe that local films should be given enough financial support to prove the efficacy of the local producers and directors. Most of the local artists may have talents but could not expose it due to lack of finance. Moreover, local movies can showcase our culture and traditions and if enough money is given to them, they have the chance to show our traditions on overseas stage. For example, a Telugu movie named ‘bahubali’ has set the Telugu film industry on international mark.
To conclude, I believe that governments should provide financial assistance to locally produced films as there are many talented people who are willing to show their talent and it can be done only by given them some financial support.
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while other thinks this is role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Some people think competitive sport is important for a child’s education. Others think it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. SOme people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years. But other people think everyone should have the freedom to choose where they work. 73
- the diagram below shows the process of maple syrup production 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09259259259 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62493320837 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3309546576 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418530591859 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13950788648 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110532288106 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257582982173 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836096264937 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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