Dear Leena,
Hopefully, everybody is doing well at home.
Thanks a million for your letter. I can not tell you how much I am delighted to hear about your visit to India next week.
Recently, I shifted to Bangalore due to a new job in the company. It is a wonderful city where you can explore multiple tourist places and hill stations within a reach of 5km to 10 km. Unlikely to the native place where it used to take us three to 4 days to reach hill stations. Is it not exciting, is it?
I have bought a new flat near to the office. It is in a Vijaya Bank Layout, Bangalore. My house is next to the Forum mall, where we can explore new releases and do lots of shopping. Without having a single doubt, you are going to stay with me.
As I informed you earlier, Bangalore's weather is better than the other cities. However, it turns a bit colder in October and November months. Therefore, I would recommend you to carry light warm clothes when you visit here.
Since it is your first time in Bangalore, I will show you some famous tourist places here. There, we can explore multiple options ranging from river rafting, mountain trekking, bungee jumping to wild-life centuries.
I am impatiently waiting for your arrival!
See you soon.
Anika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for your arrival! See you soon. Anika
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52197802198 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41153714706 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.545667559 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.7857142857 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159619780245 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460284873232 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495364254434 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854073526709 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445806773588 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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