Dear Leena,
Hopefully, everybody is doing well at home.
Thanks a million for your letter. I can not tell you how much I am delighted to hear about your visit to India next week.
Recently, I shifted to Bangalore due to a new job in the company. It is a wonderful city where you can explore multiple tourist places and hill stations within a reach of 5km to 10 km. Unlikely to the native place where it used to take us three to 4 days to reach hill stations. Is it not exciting, is it?
I have bought a new flat near to the office. It is in a Vijaya Bank Layout, Bangalore. My house is next to the Forum mall, where we can explore new releases and do lots of shopping. Without having a single doubt, you are going to stay with me.
As I informed you earlier, Bangalore's weather is better than the other cities. However, it turns a bit colder in October and November months. Therefore, I would recommend you to carry light warm clothes when you visit here.
Since it is your first time in Bangalore, I will show you some famous tourist places here. There, we can explore multiple options ranging from river rafting, mountain trekking, bungee jumping to wild-life centuries.
I am impatiently waiting for your arrival!
See you soon.
Anika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for your arrival! See you soon. Anika
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51982378855 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43632647662 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647577092511 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1217937368 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3529411765 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3529411765 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168733100041 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446696388437 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446814336787 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074055450127 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394768397267 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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