You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter: (asked in Sep 2017 – India)
– When and where did the talk take place?
– Explain why the members enjoyed it.
– Suggest another lecture to be done in the future.
Dear Mr.Ahamad ,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude about the latest presentation that you have done in the Roma Theater at our club last week in November 22th. On behalf of all the club members, I would like to thank you very much for accepting our invitation
Most of the attendees and I were extremely enjoying your presentation because it was extremely informative and helpful. you really succeed to elaborate the importance of various physical activities on the body health in a very astonishing way.
Therefore, we would be extremely appreciated if you could allocate another lecture session about the dangerous of smoking for all members next month or any suitable time at the middle your tight schedule. However, please inform us at least 2 weekes before in order to arrange the meeting session and announce it among all members.
I look forward to receiving your supportive response.
Best regards
Bilal
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- The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree? 89
- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? 73
- All over the world societies are facing a growing problem with obesity This problem affects both children and adults What are the reasons for this rise in obesity How could it be tackled 42
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ahamad
Dear Mr.Ahamad , I am writing this lett...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Mr.Ahamad , I am writing this letter...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Ahamad , I am writing this letter to express my g...
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Line 25, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... was extremely informative and helpful. you really succeed to elaborate the importa...
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Line 55, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve response. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55194805195 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74353653446 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720779220779 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2741379776 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156052853883 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566727147988 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500139741708 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809842752701 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614147786353 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 8.71597938144 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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