You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter your neighbour. In your letter
Describe the problem.
Say how long it has been a problem.
Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.
Dear Ram,
I hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter to drive your attention towards loud music you play every evening. I am a student and around 5 p.m. I reached home every day. My exams are coming and every evening when I try to focus on my studies your music makes it difficult for me to concentrate.
In addition, this problem is persistent from last 2 weeks, especially, since you buy your new home theatre system. It is annoying and makes difficult for all your neighbours. I tried to reach you through phone but your number is not working.
I don’t want you to stop enjoying but it will be great enough if you could keep the volume down and close your windows and doors during your music time. More importantly, if you can stop playing in the evening time as that’s the only time I have to study.
I hope you will understand my circumstances and do the needful as required.
Thank you in anticipation.
With regards,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ram, I hope you are doing well, I am writing ...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ening. I am a student and around 5 p.m. I reached home every day. My exams are co...
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Line 25, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you in anticipation. With regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75287356322 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57443040325 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.573195433 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240025079167 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874242991877 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519719299199 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124275658871 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507983602485 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.