You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter your neighbour. In your letterDescribe the problem.Say how long it has been a problem.Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.

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You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter your neighbour. In your letter
Describe the problem.
Say how long it has been a problem.
Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.

Dear Arun, I
I am writing this letter to report you the issue I am facing for long because of you.

The problem is overflowing of water from your tank. Due to the excess overflow, there are severe damages. The water is overflowing into my garden and damaging plenty of trees. Even some of the plants have fluctuated because of the excess of water dropped into the ground.

Though it is occurring for a long time, I did not take it seriously. Now, because of the leakage, most of the trees have exhausted. So I need you to take the necessary steps to control the overflow. Please contact plumper and get it solved soon. If you need my help to resolve it, please feel free to call me.

Looking forward to hearing back from you.

Yours sincerely,
G.Sinthu

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: I
Dear Arun, I I am writing this letter to report you th...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rden and damaging plenty of trees. Even some of the plants have fluctuated because of the e...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring back from you. Yours sincerely, G.Sinthu
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Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sinthu
... back from you. Yours sincerely, G.Sinthu
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, even so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 138.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57246376812 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34949171549 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7540431867 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.5833333333 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188124049889 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629440130367 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056566786709 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961050582545 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244104775736 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.04 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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