You want to be a member of a couch surfing community.
1) Describe the place you offer.
2) Describe your home town
3) Give information about your possible activities
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to become a member of a Couchsurfing community. I want to give you information about the house and a place which is perfect for Couchsurfing users.
I own three homestays in Munnar hill station. It offers accommodation with free wifi and parking with a shared lounge.
It is a 5 km away from Udupi waterfall which is the famous tourist spot in Munnar. At this homestay, one can explore the serene mountain view and garden. On the first floor, there is a fully equipped kitchen connected with a light caramel dinette. Other facilities offered at this property is dry cleaning and laundry, which helps the tourist to stay here hassle-free.
Munnar is a famous hill station place which is encompassed by scenic hills and greenery with a lot of tea and coffee plantation. It is an idyllic destination for all adventure lovers. The local people are incredibly warmed and friendly and have a laid back lifestyle.
Even though the town is a quiet place, it still has a wide range of activities to offer. These include mountain biking, serene lakes for boating, picnic spots near a waterfall, wildlife, and temples.
I hope this information will be helpful for couch surfers who want to spend their holidays in a tranquil area like this.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards
Anjik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is perfect for Couchsurfing users. I own three homestays in Munnar hill stat...
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Line 19, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Even though the town is a quiet place, it still has a wide range of activities ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70856327598 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7588616004 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151979540706 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426528451654 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064557893765 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778177837095 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074818829785 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.