some people believe technology has made man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people reckon that use of technology has made mankind more sociable whereas others oppose the claim and say that it makes them less friendly. I think technology has a significant role in social life and its effects depend upon the way one uses it. In this essay, I will look into both sides and try to draw a conclusion.
On the one hand, some people claim that technology helps people to socialize with others. One way to build relationships with other people is by sharing thoughts and ideas. Technology can remove the obstacles related to time and space by allowing individuals to share photos,videos and clips. According to a survey about senior citizens and information technology conducted at Harvard University in 2018 found that social media was quite convenient for seniors to be in touch with their fellow citizens. Hence, technology helps people to remain in contact with others.
On the other hand, some people believe that technology makes us less sociable. However, it is true in some cases where technology can make people less friendly. For example, today's youngsters like to watch movies and playing video games on TV or computers rather than going outside, making connections or playing field games such as football or basketball. In this case because of technology, they sometimes become less sociable. However, it totally depends upon an individual and the way he use those technological devices.
To conclude, considering both sides, I personally believe that technology has way more benefits to society to be more social. However, technology may have some drawbacks in socialization but that entirely depends upon its way of use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , videos
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Line 9, column 493, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...pends upon an individual and the way he use those technological devices. To co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, whereas, for example, i think, such as, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18081180812 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75111987333 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5855478876 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288757268093 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107509363207 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10442006644 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174360372935 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476968574025 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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