Some people believe that there will be a reduction in Air travel in the future. Do you think this trend has positive or negative development.
Some people claim that there would be a decline in the travelers who commute via airlines in the future. I would argue that it may have some positives but it will negatively impact a country. In this essay I will briefly discuss about the development regarding Air travel and try to draw some conclusions.
One of the positive of reduction in Air traffic would be declination in the use of Air Fuel. Petroleum, which is a non renewable source of energy, is depleting and being consumed at a high rate. Everyday, thousands of airplanes traveling from point A to B and a large amount of oil is consumed. Hence, reduction in Air traffic would save a significant amount of oil resources. However, this measure would be short term solution to depletion of petroleum, because at the moment there is no alternative of this mode of transportation.
The major drawback of this trend would affect the economy of a country. Many countries make huge amounts of money from Airlines and tourism. People around the world spend enormous amounts of money on their holidays. For example, every year a large number of Europeans visit Thailand to spend their holidays, and Airlines and tourism contributes around 25% of the total economy of the country in 2018. Reduction in Air travel would reduce in tourism as a result economies will suffer.
To conclude, although it is true that Air traffic consumes a lot of fuel, it is hard to ignore its contribution to a country's economy. Overall, I believe it will be the negative development despite some short term positives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, for example, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77971867042 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6578935216 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330419385456 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109494852829 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814241105836 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199353791834 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859322594587 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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