Colleges and universities should require all
faculty to spend time working outside the academic
world in professions relevant to the courses they
teach.
It is too extreme to verify that all of the faculty in the colleges and universities should spend time working outside the academic world related to the courses they are researching compulsorily.Whether this kind of requirement would be beneficial for faculty differs in different fields.
On one hand,it must admit that in the fields which are paying much attention to their applied functions,it is essential for the researchers to be close to the work regarding .For one things, they teach skills rather than theories.For example,the teachers who are major medicine need to work in the hospital to observe the real efficiency and side effect of a kind of medicine as well as make the study about patients advice and preference about the medicine.Moreover,the journalism is commonly seemed as the subject demanding keep constant touch with the public.Their report should always reflect the prevail social events and articulate public attitude toward the society development.For the subjects such as the computer science,it is important to not lose contact with the prevail and adjust their teaching as well as researching directions along with the universal development.
On the other hand,for the subjects attaching importance on the theory research,it would be less useful and even time-wasting for them to do such job which occupied the time to do experiment and search reference.For instant,the theoretical physics is a science that the scientists must spend nearly all of their time to form a hypothesis from the evidence of the past lab research ,observations,because most of the theory may not be proved through the real world such as the relative theory ,a subject based on the speculation.Besides,the nature sciences are surrounding by related books,discussions with their workmates all the time.Philosophy is well-known as a subject major in reasoning and the daily work of philosophers is to do the logic conjectures not to do social contact in the society.
In addition,the fields dominant by the imagination require more free time to reflect freely about life,beauty and humanity,especially in the art field.Freelancers are the representatives,whose a considerable proportion of their working period is monopolized by traveling,reading or just surfing on the Internet.But consequently,their works prove to be highly-qualified.
In conclusion,different fields concentrate on the different proposes respectively.For those aiming to the public,it is essential for them to practice in the social employment,but for others which are always aliened from the common ,it seems kind of useless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, for one thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56926952141 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84086630796 2.79657885939 137% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539042821159 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 265.643068797 60.3974514979 440% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 442.2 118.986275619 372% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.4 23.4991977007 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.2 5.21951772744 655% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 7.80617977528 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211837738173 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143706171833 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163503233657 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143706171833 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163503233657 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.5 14.1392134831 315% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.17 48.8420337079 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 12.1743820225 290% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.21 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.21 8.38706741573 146% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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