Making friends and keeping them is a very challenging and significant thing in our lives since it is getting more difficult to trust and get on well with people as we grow up. Therefore, I agree with the statement of it is more important to keep old friends than making new ones. My reasons are going to be explained in this essay.
First, all individuals built their characters since childhood with their friends, family and their growing environment. It is simpler to make friends in early ages because, we would not approach people with any prejudgements hence, we accept them in the way they are. In time, these friends that we made in our past start to stay or leave because of the conditions of the life itself. If a friend of ours gives us the feeling of trust, honesty and sincierity then we try to keep them in our daily life. Thus, meeting them, chatting with them and so on become a enjoyable routine. The sense of knowing a friend like this in our lifes keeps us happy, calm and stable. Because, we would be aware of the fact that there are people that we can count on any time for any circumstance.
Second, making friends in business life or in any working environment is so tough and I personally do not believe that it is possible. Why? Because, people become more selfish and careless every single day. Moreover, these self centered people would like to manipulate the actions and others in the way they could get advantage and benefit. In this cold business world the thisng which has the greatest importance is to defence ourselves and keep our eyes open in order to not to get hurt.
Third, of course we will keep meeting new people since the humankind is social creature however, it is significant to keep the distance and learn the properties and priorities of these people. Because, we have to be aware of that not everyone comes into our lives to have fun and live a well built friendship. There are many people who are able and willing to do anything for their goals including using others like puppets. My reasons may seem pesimistic but I know that the world we live in pushes me to consider the occasions that way.
As a conclusion, giving a shot to get to know the others in time is nice however, it is way more important to keep the old true friends in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refore, I agree with the statement of it is more important to keep old friends th...
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Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...em, chatting with them and so on become a enjoyable routine. The sense of knowing...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... eyes open in order to not to get hurt. Third, of course we will keep meeting ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51558752998 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44371686059 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496402877698 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1853348545 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1052631579 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239749067411 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835789348798 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12949406847 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161411929234 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110757191574 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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