Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary world, the prominence of air planes or helicopters is undeniable, and its contributable influences are by all means apparent. Nevertheless, while an average proportion of citizens opine that the invention of cost-effective air transportation has brought many feasible merits due to its assisting global traveling, the rest inhabitants observe that this advent has had adverse effects on people’s daily lives.
On the one hand, some people hold an unwavering belief that the appearance of economical air travel is of paramount importance to the international scale. In the first place, airplanes or helicopters’ occurrence is widely admitted to have made global tourism and movement more accessible and handy. While it can take you nearly two days to get to your destination with the distance about 1000 kilometers, the time is just slightly above one hour if you choose to travel by airplane, so people will not hesitate to move too far away from your current place. Another obvious beneficial field of this trend is that the seat through air travel is pleasant and satisfying. Dwellers can relish the breathtaking scenery from the cloud, witnessing the whole globe just through their eyes.
On the other hand, others presume that despite from the positive aspects of economical air travel, its downsides also persist. First of all, the burgeoning population of air planes and helicopters can be the precursor for increasing air pollution. It is apparent that air transportations release too much exhaust and emissions, which has killed thousands of people each year. Residents are easily exposed to toxic pollutants from planes, which led to many alarming diseases. Furthermore, the price of a plane’s trip can be very costly and once plane crashes happens, maybe hundreds of people will be dead, making it one of the most disastrous accidents. That explains why nations often deliberate airplanes as a target to take revenge on an enemy country.
To sum up, I am convinced to believe that the plus points of the air motion’s advent is much more crucial. However, we must gain full-scale awareness when and how much to use air transportations so that we can minimize the demerits to some certain extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, first of all, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26038781163 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04354364101 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620498614958 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5386049708 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21719225917 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642998413685 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531917799205 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115528063606 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351550606932 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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