Watching TV and giong to cinema are the two favorite spare time activities of many people. There are many kinds of programmes, series or films fpr everyone and that is why we can select any of them very simply. All of these visual things and videos have an effect to our lives especially to our characters and these effects varies people to poeple. I would like to explain my toughts and reasons of them in this essay.
Firstly, I would like to talk about the childrens behavior. There are some distinctions between the children in the past and todays children. They can easily learn how to use a technological devices so it is very easy to reach any cartoon, movie or video by themselves. Unfortunately, there have been times that their parents are not see what they saw and learn and these images and visuals may be harmful for their personality, may include violence, drug addictions and so on. By seeing these videos so much, all the things in those become normal to them and by the time they grow up we do not see the anomaly. Hence, it would get so difficult to change or reshape their character.
Secondly, I want to explain my concerns about teenagers. Todays TV and film industry is based on some unchangable phenomenas namely, violence, drugs, sexuality, war, stealing, killing and lies. The list goes on but in my view these are the most rated ones. There are some platforms that provide to watch many kinds of films and series about these topics and many teen people are eagerly watch there movies and so on just because there are popular. That visuals turn them into wannabes and erase their imagination and creativity. They do not realize their capacity and thinks that they are useless just like the characters in the movies they watch.
Thirdly, about adults, most of them have been working for a long time and their biggest enjoyable activity is to watch TV. Some of them thinks that the images they saw is one hundered percent real and hence they become easy to be tricked. The others on the other hand are very suspected about the visuals and question every thing so they become very hard to tell something. I have seen the both sides and I think they cannot decide what to believe and finalyy that pushes them to be hesitating in routine.
In a nutshell, watching TV and movies is fun however, there are many side effects on us therefore, we should watch everything with a consciousness and selectiveness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dren. They can easily learn how to use a technological devices so it is very easy...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'watched'.
Suggestion: watched
...topics and many teen people are eagerly watch there movies and so on just because the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, i think, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66433566434 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46000384811 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9778990264 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0592367887125 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182403402219 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250808326932 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.034862309583 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197950944647 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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